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Dark as night
Bright as day
She sneaks through shadows
Where none exist

Obviously there
Yet never noticed
Loved by enemies
Hated by allies

Dark as day
Bright as night
Allies of enemies
Enemies of allies

Misunderstood
For who can claim to know
Which side a spy is really on

©2008-2009 *MariaShade
:iconmariashade:

Author's Comments

hmmm being a spy is a hard job... where being misunderstood is normal but can lead to many problems


This is inspired by my character Maria and some of her spying exploits which have gotten her into trouble with not only the enemy

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Powerful Line "Allies of Enemies Enemy of Allies"

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Often times a gentle influence will win over a forceful one, this is true in many things; love is just the most important of them.

-Me
:iconmariashade:
thats what I thought when it came to mind

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Its always the last place you look. Of course it is why would I keep looking after I've found it.

Very important article look at it, now!
:iconmariashade:
thnx

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Its always the last place you look. Of course it is why would I keep looking after I've found it.

Very important article look at it, now!
:iconstudpup:
i too love this line: Allies of enemies; Enemies of allies

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everyone stands alone at the heart of the world
pierced by a ray of sunlight,
and suddenly it is evening.
:iconmariashade:
mmm yes I just loved it... it was one of those lines that just suddenly appear in your head... I had to risk repeating a theme to write it down

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Its always the last place you look. Of course it is why would I keep looking after I've found it.

Very important article look at it, now!
:iconstudpup:
repeating a theme is worth it if you make it worthwhile :)

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everyone stands alone at the heart of the world
pierced by a ray of sunlight,
and suddenly it is evening.
:iconninjastar13:
very clever idea. love the way the poetry plays you like a spy would play you. misdirecting yet there, very well put together. I Totally love this piece. The tone content and everything all fit together and that os the mark of a good poet.
:)

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:jedi: Gallery: [link] :ninjastar:
---Surrealism without purpose is like fish...
Peace :peace:
:iconmariashade:
really... I'm not that great a poet really this one kinda just appeared in my head... My poems always seem to be great when they appear like that, but are horrible if I actually TRY to write one... I guess thats my curse

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Its always the last place you look. Of course it is why would I keep looking after I've found it.

Very important article look at it, now!

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